Vocaloid: Black Rock Shooter

Nice angle but the focus is way off, should have gone with a smaller aperture (ard f5.6-8) to get it all in sharp focus. If you where shooting through a sheet of glass then maybe focusing and then compensating manually would help too (I'd recommend a tripod if you did that). Don't be afraid to bump the ISO if your shutter speed gets too low. A smaller aperture would also help that overexposed bit on the stomach as well.

Lighting wise, i'm seeing a bit too much shadow on the face, so adding some fill light would help. You don't need any fancy strobes or lights for figurines, a phone or an ipod backlight would do just fine. As for the reflection on the top left, i'd say theres not much that can be done (to my knowledge at least) unless you have a circular polarizing filter.